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Money Corrupted the Soul by Charmed-Ravenclaw Money Corrupted the Soul by Charmed-Ravenclaw
Available on Red Bubble! www.redbubble.com/people/charm…

So, this is a remake of a very old deviation of mine I made when I was 16 fav.me/dux0vu, altered after some constructive... opinion :) So far I'm the proudest of this one of my typography designs :)

Made in Adobe Illustrator using the text and various other tools. Mainly this tutorial: vector.tutsplus.com/tutorials/…

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I wouldn't mind some more constructive criticism, on:
:bulletgreen: The colours chosen
:bulletgreen: My attempt at making gears out of words and
:bulletgreen: The attempt at an x-ray effect.

My other entries you can constructively critique or vote up, you choice, include:
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really neat! I can't offer much in the way of feedback except to say that I'd prefer to see the "Analysis...Leaving Behind A Machine" font in solid letters instead of outlines. It's simply easier to read that way. But otherwise, I think *xlntwtch said all that needs saying. :D Good job!
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Made an attempt to improve it here: [link] Could you please tell me what you think of it?
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah ok then. Thanks for your thoughts!
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ricky4 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
This is an awesome concept and so true today! :aww: Great design btw! :nod:
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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ricky4 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Most welcome! :cuddle:
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Fyviane Featured By Owner May 14, 2012   General Artist
i would wear this! :D
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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manar1 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
i like this one :D nice design :D good luck
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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