So, this is a remake of a very old deviation of mine I made when I was 16 [link] altered after some constructive... opinion So far I'm the proudest of this one of my typography designs
Made in Adobe Illustrator using the text and various other tools. Mainly this tutorial: [link]
I wouldn't mind some more constructive criticism, on: The colours chosen My attempt at making gears out of words and The attempt at an x-ray effect.
My other entries you can constructively critique or vote up, you choice, include: The Time For Wit [link] Who Needs Talent? [link] I Hate Statistics [link]
This is really neat! I can't offer much in the way of feedback except to say that I'd prefer to see the "Analysis...Leaving Behind A Machine" font in solid letters instead of outlines. It's simply easier to read that way. But otherwise, I think *xlntwtch said all that needs saying. Good job!