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My Crumbling Sanity by Charmed-Ravenclaw My Crumbling Sanity by Charmed-Ravenclaw
I entered this off another competition on another website but they never got back to me, so I'm entering it here. This is a remake of this: [link]

Made using Adobe Illustrator, although cropped in Photoshop.

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Some questions to ponder:
1. Is it actually better than its predecessor? What are their strengths and weaknesses against each other?
2. Should I make it look crazier? Is black and white too dull?

I have just made a T-shirt version of this available for sale! [link]
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Dennuuu Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
This is a super late comment.
 Is it better than its predecessor? definately.
Should you make it look crazier? I reckon it would look awesome if the letters were a bit more 3d, or if you emphasised the shadows a bit more.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, thank you for the constructive criticism! I'll keep it in mind if I choose to remake this!
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niederklopfer Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
This is definitely better than the first.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the feedback.
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MewNyan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
the more amnesia i play the more my sanity drifts away
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. Thank you for commenting.
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