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My Crumbling Sanity by Charmed-Ravenclaw My Crumbling Sanity by Charmed-Ravenclaw
I entered this off another competition on another website but they never got back to me, so I'm entering it here. This is a remake of this: [link]

Made using Adobe Illustrator, although cropped in Photoshop.

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Some questions to ponder:
1. Is it actually better than its predecessor? What are their strengths and weaknesses against each other?
2. Should I make it look crazier? Is black and white too dull?

I have just made a T-shirt version of this available for sale! [link]
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fourspaced Featured By Owner Edited Dec 6, 2014  Student General Artist
i like it a lot, but i think the last letters should crumble towards the earth more. That would be difficult without making it illegible though. or, make the letters only explode outwards and eliminate the pieces which have fallen to the ground.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, legibility was a main concern of mine for that one. Still, thank you for your thoughts! 
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Dennuuu Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
This is a super late comment.
 Is it better than its predecessor? definately.
Should you make it look crazier? I reckon it would look awesome if the letters were a bit more 3d, or if you emphasised the shadows a bit more.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, thank you for the constructive criticism! I'll keep it in mind if I choose to remake this!
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niederklopfer Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
This is definitely better than the first.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the feedback.
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MewNyan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
the more amnesia i play the more my sanity drifts away
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. Thank you for commenting.
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