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Interesting question you ask there.
I like how you've set the scene at the beginning and then provoked thought with the end... thus making it more story-like?
I feel as if you could use different punctuation instead of a full stop.. but that might just be me.
Not bad.
I like how you've set the scene at the beginning and then provoked thought with the end... thus making it more story-like?
I feel as if you could use different punctuation instead of a full stop.. but that might just be me.
Not bad.