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Money Corrupts the Soul

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FULL VIEW! It'll be much clearer to you.

As you can see, another remake of a shirt I did, [link] but an attempt to improve through a critique.

Made using Adobe Illustrator and Photoshop. Photoshop was used to apply some filter effects.

:iconcritique-it:
1. Is the X-Ray effect more apparent?
2. Is it much more difficult to read?
3. Should I put more typography elements in?

SHIRT VERSION HERE: [link]
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1250x1528px 3.81 MB
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LiliWrites's avatar
Oh, I definitely like this one better. The x-ray effect is much more apparent and adds some dimension/dynamics to the piece.